Saturday, August 8, 2009

Excerpt from choice #3

They used to come to her broken
wanting to be fixed.
her heart would beat out of its chest
beating too fast.
you can't inhale when you're drowning.
drowning in someone else's love.
the water of your reluctance won't agree with your lungs.

3 comments:

Natalie Jane said...

ooo baby baby. I like it. You're Virginia Woolf. I want to be Virginia Woolf too. Let's write a book.

Austin said...

this is pretty incredible. you always have a really great way of ending all of these excerpts

Emily Rigby said...

:) that means a lot. really.